Comments on: German Storybirds – Year 8

By: Avoiding headaches and improving classroom support - Box of Tricks

Avoiding headaches and improving classroom support - Box of Tricks — Sat, 27 Mar 2010 07:49:17 +0000

[...] offer foreign language support in terms of fonts but publishing restrictions are placed on Storybirds written in foreign languages because, they argue, these Storybirds cannot be understood and therefore cannot be moderated.This [...]

By: ThomasW

ThomasW — Mon, 01 Feb 2010 13:19:56 +0000

I love HarveyH’s one! There are a lot of nice full sentences that are detailed!

By: MichaelA

MichaelA — Mon, 01 Feb 2010 07:20:28 +0000

I love the way that kieran used his pictures as they fit in well with the text, i can also see no obvious mistakes !!

By: thomash

thomash — Sun, 31 Jan 2010 20:58:16 +0000

KieranW, your storybird is very good. You have a wide range of vocabulary for a student learning German for just 6 months. In the final slide however, there is a slight mistake, but on the whole a marvellous effort and you should be proud.

By: AlexJ

AlexJ — Sun, 31 Jan 2010 17:50:00 +0000

I thought Kieran W’s storybird was good because he used good pictures and vocabulary, also the sentence structure was good!

By: Harvey A 8T

Harvey A 8T — Sun, 31 Jan 2010 16:35:16 +0000

kieran w yours is awesome and really imaginative

By: alistair H

alistair H — Sun, 31 Jan 2010 13:16:55 +0000

I think Harvey’s is really good. The description matches the pictures well. The writing also has quite a lot of detail init. There are no obvious mistakes either. Wooo go harvey

By: samuelr

samuelr — Sun, 31 Jan 2010 12:33:09 +0000

I thought that kieran w’s storybird was very creative aqnd liked the pictures that he put with it

By: alex c

alex c — Sun, 31 Jan 2010 11:48:34 +0000

Well done Kieran i especially like the way you add extra detail to your sentances well done

By: dominics

dominics — Sat, 30 Jan 2010 10:31:34 +0000

I thought Tomasw’s was very good and i didn’t spot any mistakes