Comments on: Mis vacaciones – Year 11

By: HarryD

HarryD — Mon, 15 Mar 2010 13:26:43 +0000

EthanL: Pronunciation is very good however the speech could be clearer, but it terms of Spanish, very good. You use a good range of vocabulary, for example: Lo malo y lo bueno and cinco estrellas. Overall, a good presentation.

By: Matt S

Matt S — Sun, 14 Mar 2010 10:13:45 +0000

Harry: Overall, I thought it was a very good presentation. You spoke very clearly and were easy to understand. I couldn’t find any obvious mistakes in your script either. However, I don’t think you used all the tenses (no future), and the vocab wasn’t particularly adventurous either. Overall, I thought it flowed well, and you were very easy to understand, although you could well have made it more complex in parts.

By: Ollie R

Ollie R — Fri, 12 Mar 2010 11:15:26 +0000

Chris B: You have a good use of complex sentences and conjunctives such as “ademas” there a few pronunciation errors but they do not detract from the quality of your sentences. Love the pictures and overall you deserve a cheeky A+ xx

By: Alex B

Alex B — Fri, 12 Mar 2010 11:14:31 +0000

Conor S: Good pronunciation and useds a wide range of vocabulary.
Good use of tenses eg conditional with ‘tendria que.’
At times it is a little bit quiet, though is accent and fluency are very good.

By: Jacob Andrews

Jacob Andrews — Fri, 12 Mar 2010 11:13:23 +0000

Chris B. The complexity of your presenattion is very good, using words such as ‘ademas’, however the sound quality is not great and a few words are pronounced wrong but other than that the complexity is very good, using a wide variety of sentance structure. However, in some cases you could start sentances with different beginnings other than verbs. Very Well DONE Chris A*

By: chris F

chris F — Fri, 12 Mar 2010 11:12:42 +0000

Alex B: fast talking but good range of language and vocab. Uses good sentences and doesn’t develope as much as possible. good though

By: TomS

TomS — Fri, 12 Mar 2010 11:10:54 +0000

EthanL has generally good desciption throughout such as inolvidable and temprano and uses some varied structure with lo bueno que and normalmente. Speech is quite fluent, perhaps slightly slow with the odd stumble over words. No real big mistakes.

By: Ethan L

Ethan L — Fri, 12 Mar 2010 11:10:53 +0000

Chris, really liked the pictures…and i think you have a good range of vocabulary, you have used the three tenses which is good although your pronunciaton needs improving as it is difficult to understand what your saying.

By: RoshanS

RoshanS — Fri, 12 Mar 2010 11:08:46 +0000

Ollie uses basic constructions but makes them very good by using endings such as ‘-isimo’ and uses words such as ‘normalmente’ and ‘generalmente’ to great effecrt. Also uses three tenses with only a few minor mistakes. Very good man xx

By: CMS

CMS — Wed, 10 Mar 2010 17:58:15 +0000

Siiick tune Alex gee.
Complexity- creo que and carísimo
Comparative sentences used
I noticed one possible mistake, however, I am unsure whether or not the gerund should be used as to the infinitive when he says “prefiero ir al extranjero mas que en Inglaterra.
Also uses en la mañana as to por la mañana towards the beginning. Good Fluency and accent throughout.