Comments on: Year 8 Animations: Housework

By: HarveyA

HarveyA — Thu, 27 May 2010 07:17:51 +0000

Ben M’s animation was sehr gut! he used lots of different answers to keep it fresh and the language was spot on as far as I can see. He could have timed the bubbles though instead of them coming up at the same time but all in all very well done ben!

By: maxst

maxst — Tue, 25 May 2010 15:07:47 +0000

Ben M’s was very good i liked it how the thing you where talking about was in the background.the only problem was that it was to quick and you needed to split the text up into smaller chunks.;)

By: MichaelA

MichaelA — Mon, 24 May 2010 06:19:32 +0000

ArjunR: I thought that your animations were good and your understanding of the topic was clearly adement. However spelling could have been improved.

By: Samuel R

Samuel R — Sun, 23 May 2010 20:47:42 +0000

ben I like the animation and I think that the language in it is great, you got the word order right and most of the spelling to what I could see but the only thing that I would have to criticise you in is that the speach bubbles were put on and of to quickly and I didnt have enough time to read all of it but other than thatr great job!!!!!!!!!

By: AlexJ

AlexJ — Sun, 23 May 2010 13:22:59 +0000

Harry C,

I thought you used a reasonable amount of vocabulary and i liked how it was set out. Your speech bubbles disappeared too quickly though.

AlexJ

By: joes

joes — Sun, 23 May 2010 12:37:30 +0000

This comment is for dominics. I thought the writing was very good and mostly accurate but you got your ie’s and ei’s mixed up at the end but on the whole it was a very good animation. sehr gut!

Joes.

By: arjunr

arjunr — Sun, 23 May 2010 09:58:59 +0000

Sanatk
i liked your animation very much.The german was good because you used a range of vocab and also the people didin’t just stay still, they moved around. The only thing that could have been improved was that the speech bubbles need to be on for longer. Otherwise,awesome!

By: alexk

alexk — Sat, 22 May 2010 10:34:59 +0000

arjunr,

This is really good. All the grammar is correct and the animation is very easy to read so you can read the german. Just one bad point where a couple of spellings are wrong. Sehr gut though!

By: NathanC

NathanC — Sat, 22 May 2010 10:31:20 +0000

For Sanatk

I like how you had enough time to read each of the speech bubbles and and the german was almost perfect. You had most capitals in the right places and the verb endings look alright.

My only criticism would be that when the characters moved the speech bubbles did not which made viewing slightly confusing

By: Harry C

Harry C — Thu, 20 May 2010 20:26:45 +0000

Dominic,

I particularly like it how the subject of the conversation matched the scene and you also had the correct word order, But be careful with spellings such as Auf Wiedersehen