Year 8 publish their German Storybirds!
Posted on 30. Mar, 2011 by Mr Brown in Deutsch, Languages, Year 8
Year 8 have been working on Storybird presentations on the topic of what they get up to in their free time. Here is a selection.
In Meiner Freizeit on Storybird
In meiner Freizeit on Storybird
German homework mein freizeit. on Storybird
German homework. Likes and dislikes. To Mr Brown. on Storybird
German Homework (Likes & Dislikes) on Storybird
Hallo, Mein Name ist Sam. In meiner Freizet spiele ich gern Hockey und Handball aber ich fahre lieber Rad. Ich spiele auch nicht gern Fußball und Tennis. Ich hore nicht gern Musik. Auf Wiedersehen. on Storybird
What people do and when they do it . on Storybird
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Ninan Thomas
Mar 30th, 2011
timlee1. I think this is excellent and it has rarely any problems
Anonymous
Mar 30th, 2011
I looked at Nick Churchill’s story bird. It was very good, as his german sentences are very well constructed
somdeer
Mar 30th, 2011
jramzan- has good pictures
Fraser E
Mar 30th, 2011
I think Philip Davey’s work is very good.The German is good (as far as I can tell) and the pictures are very well chosen.
Sam B
Mar 30th, 2011
All of them are very good but some of them could have used more interesting hobbies
Philip D 8H
Mar 30th, 2011
I looked at Fraser Exley’s storybird. It is very good, and his german is very well written
alexb209
Mar 30th, 2011
like the images nick but not relevent (some of them anyway):)
Nick C
Mar 30th, 2011
Tim Lee’s storybird was very informative, and had a good variety of ideas, but some of the pictures could have been more relevant.
A M
Mar 30th, 2011
Tom’s is very good, far exceeding my expectations but football needs a b not just the Esszett.
tim'ty
Mar 30th, 2011
Nick’s was very good- it had varieties of different types of hobbies. I found it interesting. He could improve it by making the pictures more relevant to the writing.
Ninan T
Mar 30th, 2011
Tom yu i like yours and its OKAY. but you need to watch your spelling and you have mentioned no music. Lastly you have rushed this and included a pic twice.
Sam B
Mar 30th, 2011
tomhenley@ This is good and the grammar is well done
somdeer
Mar 30th, 2011
nick churchil has good pictures
lukef
Mar 30th, 2011
To Tom Henly
i like the mix of what you like and not like. also when describing the sports men, there was a good varity of words. I think you could of wriiten more for your self though.
harry H
Mar 30th, 2011
fraser Exley’s piece of work is well produced and quite detailed the only slight misgiving is that there are only a small number of slides
overall though a great peice of work!
Philip D 8H
Mar 30th, 2011
I looked at Michael Parke’s storybird. It is very good, and the german is very well written.
josh
Mar 30th, 2011
Frasser’s was very good. i liked the pictures.
Philip D 8H
Mar 30th, 2011
I looked at Richard Somers’s storybird. It is very good, and the german is very well written.
Nick C
Mar 30th, 2011
Sam Rudin’s sentences were well structured, even if they would sound odd in English. He could have spread the story across more pictures, but still very very very good
Niall V
Mar 30th, 2011
Tom Henley i’m afraid you spelt ‘Football’ wrong its actually ment to be ‘Fußball’ not ‘Fußall’
josh
Mar 30th, 2011
Sam’s were very good, but i was confused by all the writing at the front
lukef
Mar 30th, 2011
To JRamzan.
I like the use of words which we have not used before and the different family members.
Ninan T
Mar 30th, 2011
tichard i think you have done really amazing but has some slips with spelling. overall
Adam H
Mar 30th, 2011
This is very good but for the famous person you were supposed to do how much they did that. <3
Richard S
Mar 30th, 2011
Thomas Y
Yours is a very good StoryBird
Some of your words are spelt wrong but your grammar is good.
Fraser E
Mar 30th, 2011
I think Harry H’s work is very good it is well written with excellent picture
A M
Mar 30th, 2011
Tims has very good german and is well structured…. well done
josh
Mar 30th, 2011
Philip’s was very well writen, i liked the pictures as well
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m1chaelp
Mar 30th, 2011
i have read tom y’s storybird. the structure of the sentences is good and there are good activities but the pictures aren’t that interesting
tom y
Mar 30th, 2011
richard i liked your use of past tense words but you spelled a few words wrong