Year 9 publish their French storybirds
Posted on 23. Mar, 2011 by Mr Brown in Français, Languages, Year 9
Year 9 have written some accounts of their early childhood using storybird. Now leave a comment on a friend’s work. Mention two good points and one area for improvement when you do!
Quand j'étais plus Jeune on Storybird
Quand nous étions plus jeune on Storybird
Quand j'étais plus jeune on Storybird
Quand ma mère et moi étions petits! on Storybird
Quand j'étais plus jeune on Storybird
Quand j'étais plus jeune on Storybird
Quand nous étaitions plus jeunes on Storybird
Quand j'étais petit on Storybird
Quand nous étions plus jeunes on Storybird
Quand j'etais plus jeune on Storybird
Quand, elle était plus jeune. on Storybird
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Isaac
Mar 29th, 2011
All of these are excellent! Good job guys!
Will R
Mar 29th, 2011
Comment for Jack MCcann:
I really enjoyed your Stroy Bird it was very imaginitive and it has a very good choice of pictures. I really enjoyed reading it and a there was a good use of language. Yet it was quite long. Well Done.
sanat k
Mar 29th, 2011
KAM: This is good and has a nice choice of pics. It also has a great use of the imperfect tense. You could have used a few longer sentences.
Ben Moore
Mar 29th, 2011
Ben Maher- your storybird is very accurate and very detailed also. I ebjoyed reading it as I could understad everything you were trying to tell me.
Sasha Burnside
Mar 29th, 2011
Sanat Kulkarni
Very good but the pictures changed quite dramatically.
Will Robinsion
Excellent content.
Isaac Carlisle
A couple of mistypes but great picture writing combinations.
Sanjay P
Mar 29th, 2011
I think Jack Sm’s storybird on himself was very interesting; it had many verbs in the imperfect tense and a lot of good vocab as well. It could have been a bit longer but it was still really good.
Jack D
Mar 29th, 2011
To Sasha Burnside
in the first slide there was a typo, it should be ‘ennuyeux’
I liked the pictures
Overall it was very well written
Alex K
Mar 29th, 2011
kamkhalil
I enjoyed reading your storybird and it was very detailed, the accuracy was also brilliant. However, you could try and make your sentances longer. But otherwise, brilliant!
Kam K
Mar 29th, 2011
SANAT: Great use of the imperfect I especially liked the bit about your zombie family.
JACK D:Loved the use of pictures
Jack S
Mar 29th, 2011
Will Robinson
This is interesting. Lots of good vocabulary, but mechant only has one e.
.
Gut.
Jack M
Mar 29th, 2011
All good, they are all creative and well written.
Some slides were lacking in writing
but on the whole they were all good.
Rowan L.
Mar 29th, 2011
A very interesting storybird Ben M; you wrote a good amount with only a small percentage of errors: si il should turn to s’il.
BenjaminT
Mar 29th, 2011
jacksm
pro:
- good use of the imperfect tense
- good variation of activities
con:
- use greater variation of connectives
BenM
Mar 29th, 2011
Rowan, surely you didn’t use to be stupid? It was funny, and made use of strong vocabulary, but you only had one or two sentences on each page.