17 Responses to “Year 9 make animations in Spanish”

  1. EthanL

    Jun 30th, 2011

    JonC- Overall excellent, Spanish was pretty accurate – just watch your agreements! :)

  2. James I

    Jun 30th, 2011

    Really great spanish for year 9s, i hope to see you all continue with spanish and get A*s in the exams, at this rate that should be easy for all of you!

  3. HarryD

    Jun 30th, 2011

    @ed1234:

    Your vocabulary is much better than mine was in Year 9, as are your verb conjugations. Perhaps you should try to avoid repeating yourself at times such as with the words ‘siempre’ and ‘hacer’ so that you can show off more of your vocabulary. I also noticed that you got just about all of your adjective agreements correct. Congrats.

  4. AlexH

    Jun 30th, 2011

    Great work guys, I could only check out a few but I liked ed1234′s video; lots of great adjectives, but a few typos and mistakes – Un profesor no es un prodesr!

  5. KaranM

    Jun 30th, 2011

    thomash- this is a very good video the spanish is excellent. what is good to see is that all your agreements match which is good. For year 9 this is fantastic writing. One thing I will say is that maybe sometimes improve the fluency of your spanish use shorter phrases. eg instead of saying el dormitorio de mis padres and el dormitorio de mi hermano say los dormitorios de mis padres y hermanos, but really it won’t matter a huge amount.

  6. ThomasW

    Jul 6th, 2011

    To Raghav,

    Your range of vocabulary was superb and there was lots of information included. My only slight concern was that there was so much information in each speech bubble that I had trouble reading all of it in time!

  7. ChrisH

    Jul 6th, 2011

    To JonC

    I thought your range of vocab was brilliant and your use of scenes and characters were excellent. For example when you talked about having a dog (Tengo un perro)a dog walked on. However there were a few minor mistakes, these were agreements. However I thought this animation was fantastic.

  8. Jon C

    Jul 6th, 2011

    To Raghav

    Your range of vocabulary was excellent and you covered most of this year’s work. However, try to use different forms of verbs.

  9. JackW

    Jul 7th, 2011

    @ MaxBo

    Your spanish was excellent, I didn’t notice any mistakes and you used advanced vocabulary – such as ‘de momento’ and ‘y alumnos mucho alugnos’ – making it instantly more professional (if that’s the right word). Also the animation itself was good, and didn’t get boring.

    Well Done :)

  10. CharlieF

    Jul 7th, 2011

    MaxBo – great range of vocabulary, including words that we haven’t even learned. Great use of verb conjugations; just try to give us slightly longer to read it perhaps. :)

  11. Max B

    Jul 7th, 2011

    Thomas W – I think your animation is great. Your adjective agreement (un piso viejo, hija única) is perfect, and you have tried to expand your sentence construction using porque. If you did this even more, it would make your writing really detailed and interesting. Even so, overall, it is very good.

  12. Kieran B

    Jul 8th, 2011

    Ragspanish – You have produced a very interesting Domoanimate. Your vocab is quite complex (Me presento, naci en la India and Desafortuadamente) and your accents are all there. (qué and útil)

    However it is very hard to read as it is VERY SMALL writing and you often lose your place.

    Overall very good :)

  13. OllieH

    Jul 8th, 2011

    To Nathan
    You covered all of the major topics well and remembered most of the accents e.g inglés and educacíon físíca.
    Be careful with adjective agreements (La señora Radford es muy divertido)It should be Divertida.

  14. RobM

    Jul 8th, 2011

    To NathanG,
    I think your animation was very acurate qand used a variety of vocab and grammar techniques, however there was a point in the film when some of the words had symbols instead of letters!
    Apart from the little slip with the dialogue, Well done!

  15. RaghavS

    Jul 9th, 2011

    Thomash:

    *Star* – great use of language; it covered almost everything we’ve done this year.

    *Star* – you remembered to make all of your adjectives agree (una familia pequeña; mis padres son simpáticos etc.)

    *Wish* – remember to use the ‘you’ form for questions! There was a ‘¿veo la television?’ question, which is incorrect.

    :)

  16. FraserL

    Jul 9th, 2011

    @Jon C
    You have a very large range of voacb and your word endings are generally correct. You have also used many verb forms which is good. However you have to make sure your agreements are correct and music choice was not great. Great overall!

  17. ThomasH

    Jul 12th, 2011

    ed1234,

    * – Your use of vocabulary is above what is probably expected :’Wollaton es bonito y está cerca del centro de Nottingham’.

    * – The adjective endings are mostly correct. An example is ‘Mi tío es bajo y gordo y muy divertido’.

    Wish – Perhaps if you had put a little more care into your work then some silly mistakes such as the capital letters and ‘Mi abuelos son un poco tímidos y bastante alto’ may have been eradicated. Otherwise a good piece of work.


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